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Okay I'm here from :iconprojectcomment: And THIS IS MY CRITIQUE!!!! Alright, so already what I like about this would be the face the alien is making, it's...

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Okay so at the moment, all I can say about this is WOW. Once again you have utilized cell shading to create something beautiful and ter...

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Fenrad by dijin777 Fenrad :icondijin777:dijin777 3 11
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Operation:Paperbag (rough draft)
A very excited Fenrad went tearing down the halls, in search of his friends and teammates, it had been over a month since his team was put together, “The Unkillables” they were called, after a particularly nasty conflict in which only the five of them had not only survived, but managed to kill every last enemy that dared to challenge them. But Fenrad had to contain his excitement now, for he was about to call the War-Leader, Garuk, to receive the details of their first mission.
Fenrad drew his tailblade across his arm to draw some blood, before inserting the tip of the now bloodied bone into the DNA lock, which quickly confirmed his identity, and the doors hissed open, revealing his four friends; Uvnar, a blue Lunborn, as well as the only female on the team and quite proud of it. Irathius, a black Lunborn, who would train with Fenrad on a daily basis. Xraj, the only other black Lunborn, and one to take as much enjoyment demolition as was possible without it being considered
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A Lycan's Wrath
'Life is so fleeting and death is absolute, but through  God death is the gateway to eternal life and happiness' That is what the Priest said at my little brothers funeral.  I never really believed those words, they were just comfort for those who could not accept that death was an inevitable part of life.  I wasn't feeling sad as my pack laid my brother to rest, I was feeling rage, rage at the human drunk driver who hit him, rage that the man got off free because his father is the richest man in town and a personal friend of the judge.  Is there no justice?  I couldn't stand by and mourn with the rest of my family and pack, I had to do something. Confront him, scream at him, tear him apart, I did not know what I would do when I saw him, but I knew one thing... he would not get away so easily.
“Ganuk!” My Alpha was calling me, “Please come to my den.” he motioned for me to follow with his paw which I did, pushing aside the fabric that co
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a Lycanthropic Christmas
The Joneses were your typical upper middle class family, they made enough to live on one of those rich neighborhoods, and still had plenty left over to have most luxuries like two cars and an RV, but this year for Christmas the Joneses had something special planned for their children.
   “Daddy, where are we going?” Lucy, the younger of the two siblings, was in her inquisitive stage of life, where everything had to have a meaning.
   “Yeah why are we in the snowy forest?” At age ten, Robby was only a year older than his sister, but no less curious.
   “Well kids, daddy’s done some thinking and looking when I stumbled onto something amazing, I’m sure you’ll love it.” Noah seemed to have all the answers, and always managed to surprise his kids no matter what the circumstances.
   “We figured that since you kids have been doing so well in school, we’d reward you with this.” Mary
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the start of something beautiful
So I went to my first class... Honestly I was willing to be optimistic about the whole thing, but evidently they werent willing to give me the benefit of the doubt. Who’s ‘they’? it’s all my classmates who greeted me with a sound I’d only ever heard as loud as I did from a newborn baby
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE HECK IS THAT THING?”
I just flattened my ears against my head as the entire class, except the teacher, scrambled over desks and others to get to the far side of the room. I just looked at the teacher,
“I’m assuming you got the email? or you’re the stoic kind that doesn't get bothered by stuff like this. Or this has happened to you one too many times already... Probably not that last one though, but eh.” I raised my paws in the air and sat down, letting my backpack slide off my back.
   The teacher Quickly turned her attention to the rest of the class “Look class the announcement I was going t
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Literature
The Fall of the Lunborn
“Fenrir, Fenrir!”
Fenrir was moving swiftly aboard the S.S. Lunaria, when he heard his name being called, he was about to round the corner when suddenly Colonel Jax ran smack into him, knocking them both to the floor.
“Oh, apologies sir.”
The Lunborn hero general picked himself up, straightened his purple and white fur, while glaring at the colonel.
“I assume you have good reason for running about the ship calling my name out as one would to a lover?”
Jax appeared taken aback, true normally during times of non-violence; the great Fenrir was quite peaceable. Though it was painfully obvious that he wasn’t in a good mood today.
“There’s a video-com from high command at Sarthis, sir.”
“I’m well aware of the summons and was just on my way. Now if you’re done telling me useless information, get out of my way.” He said shoving aside the Lunborn.
“Sir. Is something the matter? You seem agitated.”
Fe
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The Fall of the Lunborn (draft#3)
“Fenrir, Fenrir!”
Colonel Jax ran through the deck of the SS Lunaria, his padded feet thumping against the floor of the star cruiser as he searched for his commanding officer. Rounding the corner he barreled into exactly who he was looking for, knocking him to the floor.
                “Oh, apologies sir.”
The Lunborn hero general picked himself up, straightened his purple and white fur, and glared at the colonel.
                “I assume you have good reason for running about the ship calling my name out as one would to a lover?”
Jax was taken aback, normally during times of non-violence; the great Fenrir was quite peaceable. Something seemed off about him though, almost as though some fool had made the mistake of angering him.
“There’s a video-com from high command at Sarthis, sir.”
“I’m well aware of the summons and was just on my way. N
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Literature
A Halloween Wish
“Okay kids, everyone get in the car.” My dad was taking us to the annual ward ‘trunk-or-treat’ held every year at our church on Halloween before it got dark enough to actually go trick-or-treating, My sisters were going as cowgirls, and my little brother was a sith lord. But I had the best costume of all, I was a werewolf, just like last year, and the year before that.
“Now Chris,” my dad stopped me for a moment, “Don't you think you’re a little old for this? I mean you don't exactly see a 20 year old man go to events like this unless he’s handing out candy.”
I rolled my eyes, “Oh please dad it’s Halloween, I gotta get into the spirit of things. Ya know, let loose, you’re never too old to dress up for Halloween.”
“Yes but you can grow out of trick or treating, there are gonna be kids at this thing, mostly primary kids.”
“Look if you don't want me to go then just say so.”
My dad t
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Fall of the Lunborn, draft #2
“Fenrir, Fenrir!”
Colonel Jax ran through the deck of the SS Lunaria, his padded feet thumping against the floor of the star cruiser as he searched for his commanding officer. Rounding the corner he barreled into exactly who he was looking for, knocking him to the floor.
                “Oh, apologies sir.”
The Lunborn hero general picked himself up, straightened his purple and white fur, and glared at the colonel.
                “I assume you have good reason for running about the ship calling my name out as one would to a lover?”
Jax was taken aback, normally during times of non-violence; the great Fenrir was quite peaceable. Something seemed off about him though, almost as though some fool had made the mistake of angering him.
“There’s a video-com from high command at Sarthis, sir.”
“I’m well aware of the summons and was just on my way. N
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The Fall of the Lunborn (draft#1)
   “Fenrir, Fenrir!”
Colonel Jax ran through the deck of the SS Lunaria, his padded feet thumping against the floor of the star cruiser as he searched for his commanding officer. Rounding the corner he barreled into exactly who he was looking for, knocking him to the floor.
                “Oh apologies sir.”
The Lunborn hero general picked himself up, straightened his purple and white fur, and glared at the colonel.
                “I assume you have good reason for running about the ship calling my name out as one would to a lover?”
Jax was taken aback, normally during times of non-violence; the great Fenrir was quite peaceable. Something seemed off about him though, almost as though some fool had made the mistake of angering him.
“There’s a video-com from high command at Sarthis sir.”
“I’m well aware of the summons and was just o
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Literature
flash fiction #2
“Well, that was quite pleasant wouldn’t you say?” Mickey asked Doris trying to remain formal after what proved to be a semi formal dinner.
“I’d certainly say so, and by the breadstick crumbs on your jacket, I’d say you thoroughly enjoyed yourself.” She said gesturing to his jacket where several specks of bread did indeed lay. Mickey brushed them off hurriedly, while Doris giggled.
“Well come on in, I won’t bite.” She paused “Unless you want me to.” Another giggle and then she opened the door to her Victorian house with Mickey following nervously.
“Now would you like me to get your coat? I’ve got some scotch on the table over there if you’d like to help yourself.” Without waiting for an answer she grabbed the collar of Mickey’s jacket as it slid effortlessly into her furred palm. While she hung his jacket, Mickey went over to the brown leather couch and sat down while he glanced around
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call of the pack
The year was 1777, less than a year after the human colonies had declared their independence from the land they called ‘great Britain’ now they seemed to do what humans do best, make war.
When the furless ones arrived we hoped that they would soon leave, after all, the land was already inhabited by the various tribes. The Arapaho, the apache, the Ute, and us, the ones that all tribes fear and respect, ‘the moonborn’.
Our hopes were dashed however when they began to build permanent settlements, calling them ‘colonies’. So we were content to stick to the shadows, living on the edge of these colonies until the time would come when these greedy humans would leave. Then of course they began to make war with the place they came from, as a young rebellious cub would make war with his parents.
Now our young couldn't sleep, the sounds of war were loud and ongoing, we had only one option at this point, if we were to be rid of these new humans and all their pro
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dialouge practice
Humans are idiots, it's one of the first things you learn at the patent office, constantly being shown ridiculous ideas that seem to have no real reason for existing other than boredom. Sure occasionally one of the furless idiots would come up with something interesting, but then they always asked for an exorbitant amount that it was just unreasonable. Today though would be the day the biggest idiot ever walked through my door.
    "Hey is this the uh... place where... uh..."
Clearly this moron didn't know what a patent office was.
    "Yes this is the patent office, do you have an idea you'd like to protect sir?"
His face lit up
    "Oh yeah, okay so you're gonna be blown away by this. If the army buys this patent I'll be set for life."
He began setting up his tripod and placed some papers on my desk.
    "Okay," He began already out of breath "do you know what the air force is spending way too much money on?"
He looked at me expectantly leaving
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A Werewolf at Freddy's 2 END
“There he is, start rolling. Hi there I’m Kelly from Fox news and I just wanted to ask you some questions.”
Oh great, I thought that I had finally shaken them off my tail, but I shoulda known better than to think that these bloodhounds could be shaken from a story they felt too good to pass up. Well with nowhere to run to I figured I’d just have to-
“Excuse me, but I was in the middle of a conversation so if you could just wait your turn I’m sure he won't mind talking to you people.”
“And who are you?”
“I’m Arianna, now what do you want with him?”
“Oh we just wanted to ask him some basic questions. It’s for this segment we try to have every day... are you related to him?”
Arianna paused for a moment before saying words I never thought I’d hear someone willingly say “I’m his boss.”
“Wait, you mean you hired him? Willingly!?”
“Yes I did, and I did so fully a
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A Werewolf at Freddy's 2 Part 3
"I can't believe it. That was the only job that I had any chance of keeping and you go and screw things up for me." I was in the process of driving home while raging at Insanity Wolf for killing those two people. Yeah sure they tried to kill me, and they may have deserved to die, but not like that.
"PLEASE. I DID YOU A FAVOR. THOSE TWO HUMANS TRIED TO KILL US. IT'S ONLY FAIR THAT I DO THE SAME TO THEM."
"The key word there is tried I would have been fine with you scaring them out of the building, but no. you didn't do that. Instead you just had to go devouring them like the bloodthirsty animal you make me act like."
"AND WHAT WOULD YOU HAVE HAD ME DO? LET THEM GO? HA! THEY ATTACKED US, SO WHY SHOULD I JUST LET THEM BE? IF I HADN'T KILLED THEM THEY WOULD'VE TRIED AGAIN. THESE HUMANS ALWAYS DO."
"And yet you fail to realize something. With my only source of income gone, how am I going to buy food? Or pay the bills? Or my rent for that matter? Congratulations good sir, you have doomed us
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Yes you read the title right. after what seems like an eternity of being inactive here. I'm back and now I'm offering commissions for short stories.
As for what these stories can and can't be about. let me give you the list of no's
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I reserve the right to reject a commission offer if it contains any of the following;
excessive gore/cutting,
TG
weight gain *fat*
sex,
vore,
excessive nudity (ie asking me to go into detail about gender spesific parts)
If you ask for any of these the answer will always be NO!!!
if something else happens along and I dont feel comfortable writing about it I will turn down the offer and add it to my list of NO's.
So other than what's up here feel free to ask me for stuff. As far as payment goes, the minimum is 25$ I say that because the place I want you to go to pay is right here
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it's a go fund me for my fursuit. I made it a while back but so far I havent gotten very much.
Again the minimum for one of my commissions is 25$ but feel free to donate more if you want. Please know that I'll only post the story untill AFTER I've recieved confirmation that the donation has been made.
The first three people who comment with an acceptable commission request will have their stories written. Please tell me exactly what you want so I can give you a good story.
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happy birthday man! i hope its a good one despite everything
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Happy Birthday! Try everything: www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6rP-Y…
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Not...good...
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